Window... Wonder
Flush face betrays my wonder...
Vast enclosure faintly sensed...
Deepest cry, profound yet mute...
Who's echo serves as evidence...
Returned appended, intelligibly post-scripted,
Reformed... Had it been taken in?
Through a Port on the membrane of matter's mete...
Is there a Window at the rim?
Heart now flush... Face emblushed...
Presence felt, touched, by boldest whim...
Cognizance...
Solitude...
Yearning...
Designed infusion...
Wonder is alive again...
...
To James T., Kate A., Simeon J., Jared K., Jessica C.,
Thanks for showing me wonder...
Love, Jordan M.
posted by Jordan at 12:15 PM
2 Comments:
Hey Jordie...
This is amazing, AND your song amply fits!!!
wow, jordie...looks like you are a writer's writer...I had to read it over 2-3 times...and then have it translated into russian before I could even understand it. Good Job! I really like it...even though I didn't understand all the words at first, I still felt what you were trying to convey...and that is the most important part...the essence of communication. Way to go...sorry to put a jokey post after such deep ones. I'll have to write something up here soon and put it down on the ole web blog.
And by the way, once you buy your mac, you won't be able to go to such sites as the photosynth site....unless of course you run parallels and have the vile windows on your lappy book pro. Get ready to say by by to old windows and hello to a brand new window of wonder on your lepord included silver portal into the future!
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